"Evidently, women don’t much care what men think (And yet I always accuse members of the other sex of that very thing!). It is women’s feelings that sell."
My personal opinion: I, as a woman, would love to know what men think and feel and would certainly be interessted to read a man´s perspective.
To the rest I can´t say much, because I do not know your story, but the way the agent writes it, it sounds as if the insight into Darcy´s thoughts and feelings are not going deep enough. It sounds like an advice really.... to dive deeper into Darcy´s being, so that the story is not just a well written and good to read story, but a story that is really special and brings the "ahhhh-effect" or how to call it.
Jaimy
My personal opinion: I, as a woman, would love to know what men think and feel and would certainly be interessted to read a man´s perspective.
To the rest I can´t say much, because I do not know your story, but the way the agent writes it, it sounds as if the insight into Darcy´s thoughts and feelings are not going deep enough. It sounds like an advice really.... to dive deeper into Darcy´s being, so that the story is not just a well written and good to read story, but a story that is really special and brings the "ahhhh-effect" or how to call it.
Jaimy