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Re: Help with blurb--Colonel Fitzwilliam story

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Definitely 3 or 4; please do NOT try to lure readers by misleading them about the story's main characters.

I agree that D&E stories are most popular so you can try this addition to the blurb:

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**4. Injured in service to His Majesty, Colonel Fitzwilliam receives enlightenment in his darkest hour. The lessons learned have far reaching implications for family and friends, including the Darcys, while allowing him to shape his own destiny as something more than just the second son of an Earl.

Then, since many DWG readers are fond of romance, you could add just a hint of romance by changing the addition to:
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including the Darcys and Charlotte Lucas Collins,

This doesn't give away the plot but does draw in D&E readers. And of course, the Darcys should play a role in your story as supporting characters.

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