I just barely posted your new chapters! Don't worry, I'm not scared off by comments or critiques. I've been writing for years, and so I know how to take things in the spirit they're meant. No, when I begin questioning my story because of the readers, it's usually because I did not reach my goal for that section, or because I had a problem with it too.
Anyway, I would have had this section up earlier, but my grey (previously white) dog jumped on my lap, and I decided it was time for a bath. Well, hope you enjoy it!
Anyway, I would have had this section up earlier, but my grey (previously white) dog jumped on my lap, and I decided it was time for a bath. Well, hope you enjoy it!