Suzanne,
Your second paragraph is how it lays out right now, but I still can’t cozy up to it. And in the absence of overwhelming sentiment to the contrary, I think I will just remove the whole thing. Sigh—such is our life: don’t you hate when your story won’t behave? :)
Your second paragraph is how it lays out right now, but I still can’t cozy up to it. And in the absence of overwhelming sentiment to the contrary, I think I will just remove the whole thing. Sigh—such is our life: don’t you hate when your story won’t behave? :)